The mind sees it all, as clear as sky
But the heart lives under shadows of doubt,
The person I want the most in life
Is the person I am best without.
All meteors i see; a beautiful shower
Until they plummet down on earth
The impact jolts till the core
And the craters for ever, they birth.
I should’ve loved you likewise
Adored you from distance away
But destiny lurched my ground beneath
And I came into your way.
I am biting my hand which holds a rope
I’m aware of scratches I’ll get
The weight is heavy coz hefting the hope
’tis better to wait than regret.
My inkpot boils
The feather feels heavy
Bleeding edge of my letters
shows my fight
I’m done with the writing
You’re never coming back
So, I am breaking forever
My quill tonight.
-yash
(For any constructive criticism, feel free to contact on vikskigoli@hotmail.com)

brilliant
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Thank you so much, ayesha🙂❤
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u r wlcm
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mjhy english ki bht achay say smjh ni ati ay… magar ma 2 say 3 lines milla k parti hu phr smjh anay lagti ay
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Mai apne agle post me shayad koi nazm likhu. Urdu me hone wali galtiyo ko maaf kijiyega😅.
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hahaah mil k enjoy krn g yar
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Sure🙂❤
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yup dear
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Beautiful lines Yash😍
(and a beautiful pic as well!)
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Thank you so much, Tarushi🙂.
Until you post your pics from your vacations, I can say mine are good😅
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Will post mine one day….😂
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Dear God!
Give me strength on that day.
To able to see all those photos and yet keep my calm😢
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Hahaha don’t worry…you wont be that surprised or anything!
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👌👌👌😊😊
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Thank you so much🙂
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The last paragraph is damn. You poured your heart out. Relationships have a essence and the essence is spilled in ink.
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Thank you so much, kritika for always admiring the poems. 🙂❤
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My pleasure 🙂
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Yash!!!😢
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Messiah!!!
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You gonna say something?
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Is this comment gonna be vacant?
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My notifications are loaded rn. Not sure what I missed n what not. But that was all I had to say.
Connect this above comments with everything we spoke after this comment I posted. The above one.
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Ohh. So, you mean continue from here?
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🤣🤣🤣 nooo… Nothing. Leave it.
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Oh gosh I looooooovvve this. I wanna borrow a cup of this power. Drinking this wine with wishes for a new forever. Solid forward alone in the heart, and a fresh start. 💛💛🙌🙌
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This day will be remembered forever when “The Lia” asked for this power😅.
But on a serious note: thank you so much from bottom of my heart. ❤ I really mean it.
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You are always so kind… but sincerely, thank *you,* for sharing this marvellous poem. ❤︎✍️ And write on. ;))
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Pleasure is all mine😃
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Also that amazing photo!!! 😍🏞🙏
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Hahaha… Just an attempt to click 😇.
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You are very successful at your attempts. :)) 🏆📸🤩
Keep clicking and writing. 💛
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Brilliantly penned, Yash👌
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Thank you so much Nathi❤.
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It’s my pleasure 😇
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Lovely poem! Amazing read.
❤️💜💚
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Thank you SG😇
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Wow! Just brilliant writing, absolutely loved it. Especially the last paragraph is intoxicating ❤️❤️
OAN I hope that you are okay and this is not the actual state of your mind, currently.
Best wishes 🙏
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I am fine, thank you☺. Thank you for the comment. I hope you are doing good. 😇
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That’s good to know, I am fine as well. Cheers 🙂
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“Biting a hand that holds a rope”
……..yep
You write beautifully.
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Thank you so much!
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Unbelievably lovely poem. Such heart went into it. Thank you for posting it.
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Thank you for appreciating 🙂
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Incredible points. Outstanding arguments. Keep up the great spirit.
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Thank you so much🙂
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Hi there! Do you use Twitter? I’d like to follow you if that would be okay.
I’m definitely enjoying your blog and look forward to new posts.
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Thank you so much.
Unfortunately I am not on twitter.
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