I cried for the one
Who never weep
You rested in his arms
And I couldn’t sleep.
He wrote poems on your eyes
He’s the vintner of your lips
While my dry lips hung on rum
Like a broken drowning ship.
Every second seems an era
Needles rusted in my clock
Dreams shattered into shards
Like the tides on the rock.
How clueless are my days
Winds knelling all the night
Your presence was my mithril
But the memories; kryptonite.
I can trade my starlit chandelier
With the nettles on your earth
You smile in bower of his arms
I’ll keep memories of our mirth.
Every time from shooting stars
Your face; I wish to see
I’m a bottled-message somewhere
Drifting across the sea.
Now I think of every girl, just
to block your billowing thoughts
They slit me one by one
I’m a stoic and react cannot.
Mithril- a fictional impenetrable metal
Kryptonite- another fictional metal that makes a super-human (superman, DC) palid.
–yash
(In case if you ever stumble upon my blog; I wish you Hundred suns and hundred moons. I still miss you. I am at the end of my ropes. Even though the probability of yours to see this post or my blog is same as yours coming back or reverting things back as they were once. Anyway, lots of love and prosperity to you.)

Hurts to read, can feel your heart penned out. Much strength to you
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What can I do anyway? It’s just me😅.
And here I am still waiting for your poems and posts. Don’t make me wait 😅.
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We-Kayy-Ji, you killed it in the 1st para itself.❤️ This is the best poetry I’ve read of yours. Don’t take me wrong but, you know we’ve just recently started interacting. So from these many days, whatever content I’ve read of your, this has surpassed it all. Good work here, indeed!❤️❤️❤️
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Then I would request you to have a look on my other posts as well and the one I linked at the end of this poem in your free time. I am not promoting my blog though😑. Maybe you find negativity a lot.
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Negativity????🤨🤨🤨🤨
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Friends have complaint me saying so. Asked me to be less negative and dark.
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Hahahahaha.. You know, you shouldn’t bother what the world says. Even if you’ve been through something, probably a breakup, your healing time is different than the others.
As long as you’re writing and it is helping you in a positive way, it really shouldn’t matter. Problem is, when it is making you all the more negative. Then, it is time for you to make a switch.
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Like u have said “as long as you’re….. “.
That’s true. Writing is just a sublimation for me.
Thank you for your lovely comment and that we-kayy-ji😅. That was so cool.
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Hahahaha…. I save people’s number also that way.😜 Normal is boring, you see!🤷🏻
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Never thought a person can laugh just by seeing your phone book alone😂. I also tend to have such traits of saving numbers with strange names 😅.
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Heheheh.. I don’t allow anyone to check my phone though.😅
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No one should. Government should pass a bill regarding it where if someone touches others phone without their consent or knowledge, they must be given the highest punishable sentence i.e. password of their own phone.
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Hehehehe🤣🤣🤣 I don’t want the password for anyone’s phone.
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URGENT
Please Read – https://theboldvibe.com/urgent-post-please-read/
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Told ya!!
Messiah!
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Hahahahaha.. You, crazy! Go read it. It’s imp. There is a letter someone sent for you through me.🤣🤣🤣
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I read it now. Thank you so much for taking the command. We are so thankful to you for this. Read the response of WP too.
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NP, VKG!😊😊😊😊
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I really like this. I have written similar things for the man I am missing. I am tempted to pretend your words are his.
Some things I enjoy about the poem itself :
Your diction and imagery is spot on. You rhyme words that aren’t common or easy, and you stuck to the form all the way through. I see a lot of poems that start off rhyming and give it up after a stanza or two. Well done. You have my follow.
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Wowww! Such a beautiful comment. I am so thankful that you liked it and so sorry that you can relate with it. I know it’s tough to handle such things.
And I did never expect that i will get such a beautiful thorough compliment 🙂. Thank you once again.
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Your poem is beautiful. I hope we both find that fire again some day. Looking forward to reading the next one you write.
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I don’t know if I write something more or anything soon. Until then u can have a look on the rest of my poems. Maybe you can have more to relate. And until then I am gonna read all your posts. 🙂
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I think you’ll find some on the same topic posted around March 2018, starting with inside the locked box
I am enjoying your writing as well. And admiring how much you travel
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Thank you for letting me know about the particular date.
Hahaha.. Writing, cooking, traveling, sketching, drumming etc are all just part of my sublimation.
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There are certainly worse things to get distracted by
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Heartfelt, to be said the least. 🌸
But the good news is that you are good at accepting life the way it is, or so you said.
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You asked me what would that be if get a chance to turn back to time, right? I change my answer now 😅. I would go back and won’t let the things to happen in the first place.
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See, there’s always something we all want. 😅 But then we learn to roll with the punches. That’s life. You are going to be fine, buddy!
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Yup. I know it. Juuuuust a matter of time. 🙂
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Eventually…
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It’s deep! Loads of good wishes. May u manifest a good partner into ur life.
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Thank you so much, Levina for your comment. Glad that you liked it❤.
And I hope the same.
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Well explained ❤️
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Thank you so much, ayesha🙂
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wlcm dear
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Wow! Well done! It’s quite good when you can get those kind of feelings to jump off the page. 💜
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Thank you so much, Lisa. I am glad that you liked it🙂❤.
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The poem superbly crafted and deeply stirring… you are rather phenomenally talented yash. So many beautiful lines… too many to name, without quoting half the poem, but my first favourite set was “He wrote poems on your eyes/He’s the vintner of your lips” – wow. Love. :))
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How did I miss your comment? 😐
That’s so bad and carelessness by my side.
Thank you so much for this lovely comment ❤. My poems are incomplete without your comment to it. I m so thankful to you🙂.
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Awwww!!! I didn’t know you didn’t get it, but I am very glad you did!! :)))) This poem was so so so beautiful… waiting for another one. :)) 💛🙏😉
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I hope not to disappoint you at any cost😇
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Perrrrrfick. :)) 😉 😄
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Perrrrrfick. :)) 😉 😄 JK. Just write. :)) whether you publish or not. It feels so good to write for ourselves sometimes, doesn’t it? but I do so much love your poetry. Hugs. <33
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Sometimes I feel like publishing but resist myself. But yeah, it really feels very good to write out the emotions. 🙂❤
But you have a plethora of collection. Would love to read all of them. 😇
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I believe you very nearly have read all of them yash. The collection does grow rather wildly out of control. Not sure what to do about it. But I hope you publish more. :)) Just selfishly wishing of course. :)) xoxo ❤︎😊🌻🎶
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And I would never let your wish down🙂.
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🙂 😍 🥰 🎉 ✍️ 🕺
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Wow!!! This was heart touching, Yash! I am speechless after reading this. You really outdid yourself.
“I’m a bottled-message somewhere
Drifting across the sea.” This line is perfect 👌👍
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Thank you so much for all the praise and love for the poem🙂. All your comments bring so much joy always 🙂🙂.
Have a good day ahead ❤🙂.
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Always a pleasure 🙂, you too have a great day!
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“I’m a bottled-message somewhere
Drifting across the sea.”
I loved this line!
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Thank you so much, Niharika 🙂.
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You’re truly welcome!
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