If winds and tides
Drift out my glide
And winter stops
My sail
If God is strong
Then so am I
My voyage
Will never fail.
The clouds will come
To veil the moon
You don’t rest
Don’t stupefy
Like a black cloak
Covering silver dish
It watches like a
Squinting eye
You follow the beam
That guides you to
The treasure
You wish to wield
When the winds and tides
Can’t smother your fire
Your odds
have finally kneeled.
–yash

P.S. As this decade is ending I was going through my stuffs saved in various online and offline sources. And it was when I found this poem. It dates to around 6 years back. I don’t know what was running in my head back then when I wrote this poem.
And your wish has been fulfilled with this, Firefly. And here I want to say that you are an amazing and the funniest writer. Your blog needs to reach every corner.
For any constructive criticism feel free to contact at vikskigoli@hotmail.com
OMG, OMG, OMG!!! 😻 I couldn’t even choose my favourite line from this poem. Every stanza is just mesmerizing! Reminded me of Old Man and the Sea. This poem exudes the same perseverance and determination. 💙
Damnnn, the last four lines of all the stanzas are so precious. I could totally hang these on my wall. 😿 Your writing skills are par excellence, Yash. What an optimistic and hopeful poem. Really reallly reallly loved this one. One of your best creations, without a doubt.
Send this to some famous poetry magazines. 🤠 And thank you so much for fulfilling my wish. The best gift everrr!
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Itni achi to mujhe nahi lagi jitni tumhe lag gayi😅.
BTW, 6 saal purani hai so i would say it’s somewhere an amateur attempt. But, glad that u liked it.
Nahi nahi deewar pe mat taangna😅. Till then I will be waiting for fireशायर.
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Haha, it’s seriously very well written. Claps for little Yash. 👏🥳 Ye amateur attempt tha toh experienced mode mein toh kya poem aayegi, OMG! I can’t wait to read. 😮 Haha, FireShaayar will be here soon. Aapne previous blog ko subscribe kiya na? Uspe jugnu wali hindi poem dekhna. That’s fire shaayar wala rare attempt. 🤣
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Little yash🤣.. Alright then it’s time for जुगनू
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6 years ago, Yash was definitely little. 😼👊
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Wow I really needed this boost right now! Yash, this poem is truly a gem! Saved it in my phone already 😁
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I am really happy that my poem written on a whim 6 years back can motivate people. Thank you so much, prerna. 🙂
Hope you are doing great.
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This is really a poem full of hope….😁😁😁😁
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Tha ek wo bhi samay jab motivating poem bhi likha karte the. 😅
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Who is stopping you now???
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My changed mindset and outlook for everything.
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Okay
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Honestly… yash, you have so much talent. This is just gorgeous… all what Chandni said above… even down to Old Man and the Sea!!! I love, love, your versing poetry… wonderful again to see.
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Thank you so much, Lia 😊. Every comment of yours make me realize that i write well. And I want to keep this motivation continue with me🙂. I would like to give the credit for my regularity on WordPress to you. And as I always say, I learn a lot from you. Always will 😊.
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This is so sweet… and the feeling is mutual… big time. Love love love your writing… and your presence. Hugs and here’s to happy times to come 🥂✨🍵🎊🔆💕
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And wish you a Merry Christmas tomorrow 😊❤.
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Thanks and same to you 🎄🤗
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